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Kristy and Ava
« on: July 29, 2019, 09:33:30 pm »
My two favorite characters.

I'm not sure if I'll be able to finish dialog. Not that much because of language, but because, as I realized now, long years of engineering turned me into single purpose idiot.

My idea is that Kristy is a rebellious type who doesn't follow rules (well, cats never follow rules) who doesn't care others opinions on her. Talking her into dare won't work because she doesn't need to proof herself to anyone. But she is open to fun.

Ava is sort of Kristy's younger sister or friend. She want to be like Kristy but she is not because she cares of her public image. Daring her to sex in the public will work.

I have just few sentences now, i.e. player pointing out Kristy's outdated sportswear fashion in the Glass Room. I'll try to get something more done.


Also I have a small idea for Ginger:
I'd like to add classic Thai girlfriend joke in her dialog. The response would select female/herm mode for her sex scenes.

4: Ginger: I've heard that a small p-nis shouldn't be a problem in a loving relationship.
a) Player: Mine is not small and I really hope that you don't have any. -> 5
b) Player: Mine is not small but I don't mind if yours is. -> 6

5: Ginger: Just joking. Did you got scared?
... -> Ginger is female

6: Ginger: Well, ehmm, I actually have one.
... -> Ginger is herm
« Last Edit: July 29, 2019, 09:43:02 pm by Tabby »

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Re: Kristy and Ava
« Reply #1 on: July 31, 2019, 08:08:43 pm »
It could work

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Re: Kristy and Ava
« Reply #2 on: October 17, 2019, 06:07:15 pm »
Kristy

State1: Hi dude, got lost?
State1(player is female): Hi beauty, got lost?
a. Only in my thouhts. ->state2
b. Yes, got lost in your beatiful eyes. ->state3
c. Lost here? Do you think I'm a retard? ->Fail1

Fail1: Now I see you are.

state2: My appoligy for waking you up from your thougts.
a. Nevermind, I'll go on. ->bye
b. Thanks, I wouldn't notice your beatiful eyes otherwise. ->state3

state3: I'm flattered. You are looking good too.
a. This bikini seems a bit outdated. Eighties? ->state4
b. ...TBD

state4: I dress up comfortable. I don't give a **** what others think about my appearance.
a. Neither do I. And not just about appearance. ->state6
b. I like it anyway. ->state5
c. You would look even more avesome in something... ->Fail4

Fail4: No one will be telling me how should I look. Bye.

state5: Thanks. Not that I really care.
a. You seems to be a rebel type. ->state6
b. ...TBD

state6: I'm feline, I'm not supposed to follow rules.
state6(player is feline): We are felines, we are not supposed to follow rules.
a. Let's proof it by having fun right here on public. ->state7
b. No rules. I would love to have fun with you right here. ->state9

state7: I don't need to proof myself. I won't get caught by dare.
a. I never doubted you. I just thought... ->Fail7
b. I confess I tried that because I really want you. >state8

Fail7: Fu.k you with such dishonesty.

state8: Well, that's heart warming. I like you.
a. I can't constrain myself, let's have fun right here. ->state9
b. I desperately love you ->Fail8

Fail8: What a BS, you just barely met me!

state9: Actually I'm feeling like that.
-Sex, older modified version- ->After
-Sex, 2017 redesign- ->After

After:
Done: That was splendid! I'm so soaked.
Back: That was ... not enough. Not enjoying?
a. Let's do it again! ->state9
b. You are awesome! I'm gonna see you soon. ->Bye_s

Backhere: My rebel is back. Nice to see you.
a. Couldn't wait to see you again. And have fun together. >state9
b. Nice to see you too. I'm just passing. ->Bye_s

Bye_s: See you.
a. Bye ->Backhere

Please review, suggest changes, style and language fixes.
I'm aware that I'm not good at this.

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Re: Kristy and Ava
« Reply #3 on: October 18, 2019, 07:11:01 pm »
Will do

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Re: Kristy and Ava
« Reply #4 on: November 08, 2019, 02:10:00 pm »
Kristy


Kristy

State1: Hey there. Are you lost?

State1(player is female): Hey beautiful, got lost?

a. Only lost in thought. ->state2
b.
b. I’m lost myself in your eyes. ->state3
c.
c. Lost here? How retarded do you think I am? ->Fail1



Fail1: You wouldn’t want me to answer that.



state2: Sorry if I interrupted

a. It’s fine really but I’d best be going.->bye
b.
No need to be sorry. If you hadn’t distracted me I would have missed out on your eyes. They are most beautiful.->state3



state3: I'm flattered. You’re too cute!

a. You would look cuter in a less outdated bikini I think.->state4
b.
Aww thanks. What’s your name?



state4: I dress however I feel comfortable and I don't give a f u c k about what others think.

a. Neither do I.  ->state6
b.
I like it anyway. ->state5
c.
You would still look better in something... -> Fail4



Fail4: I’m not interested. Bye.


state5: Thanks I guess.

a. You have a rebellious personality. I respect that.->state6
b. 



state6: I'm feline, ignoring rules is in my blood.

state6b(player is feline): You’re like me. We felines don’t follow rules.

a. Prove it. Let’s have a nice f u c k right here.->state7
b.
No rules. I would love to have fun with you right here. ->state9



state7: I don't need to prove myself.

a. I never doubted you. I just thought... ->Fail7
b.
b.I’m sorry, I didn’t mean that so rudely>state8



Fail7b: Your lying a s s can burn in hell.



state:8 It’s fine. I know you didn’t mean it. How about some sex on the balcony?

a. I can't wait, let's have fun right here. ->state9
b.
b. I’m desperately in love with you ->Fail8



Fail8: What a load of BS, you just met me five minutes ago!
-->state7b

state9: That actually sounds like fun.
-Sex, older modified version- ->After
-Sex, 2017 redesign- ->After



After:
Done: That was splendid! I'm soaked.

a. You are awesome! I’ll be back soon. ->Bye_s

Back: That was ... not enough. Please don’t stop.

a. Okay, I'll stick it in! ->state9
b.



Backhere: My rebel is back. Nice to see you.

a. I couldn't wait to see you again! You ready to take some dick?>state9
b.
b.Nice to see you too. I'm just passing by. ->Bye_s



Bye_s: See you.
a. Bye ->Backhere
« Last Edit: November 08, 2019, 05:27:35 pm by 1r2k5ng09df8s3 »

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Re: Kristy and Ava
« Reply #5 on: November 09, 2019, 12:43:55 pm »
Thanks,
I've done some minor mods to fit line length and walkway/beach variations


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Re: Kristy and Ava
« Reply #6 on: December 06, 2019, 05:25:37 pm »
I've started writing an idea for Ava dialog. Unfortunately I just have no time it deserves, so it's not up to level neither without big holes.

In my mind Ava is sort of Kristy's younger sister or friend. She want to be like Kristy but she is not because she cares of her public image. Daring her works.

Default state:
(If player is feline) Meow.
(otherwise) Hi.

What brings you to the Glass Room?
a) I could not miss cool lady. -> Flatter1
b) I heard of a party tonight.(lie) -> Party1
c) Meow. -> Meow1
d) I want to get some pu*sy. -> FailD (Ava: F.O.)


Meow1:
Meoow.
a) Meow. -> Meow2
b) Meeow! -> Meow3
c) Meuaw! -> Meow4

Meow2:
Meeow!
a) Meow. -> Meow1
b) Meuaw! -> Meow4
c) Meoow. -> Meow3

Meow3:
Meuaw.
a) Meow. -> Meow1
b) Meuaw! -> Meow4
c) Meoow. -> Meow2

Meow4:
Meow.
a) Meow. -> Meow1
b) Meeow! -> Meow3
c) Meoow. -> Meow4
d) Could we speak English instead? ->

MeowOut:
OK
a) You are cool lady. -> Flatter1
b) I heard of a party tonight.(lie) -> Party1


(Flatter states: flattering instead of (nonexistent?) party topic - slower progress but you get foreplay first)

Flatter1:
Hi, well, what are caught your attention?
a) I've seen such outfit only in Blue Oyster bar. -> FailD (Ava: F.O.)
b) Besides beautiful lady, I like the outfit.  -> Flatter2

Flatter2:
Thanks, I like to dress up like this.
a) What's background behind this style? -> Flatter3

Flatter3:
I like steel and chrome.
a) This is not a motorbiker gear.  -> Flatter4
b) Me too. Through I don't dress up like this. -> FailF3 (Ava: Meh, you've never seen motorbiker outfit. No sane person would ride a motorbike in something like this. I was just kidding you.)

Flatter4:
Right, just kidding. I like dominant rebel style.
a) I like the attitude.  -> Flatter5
b) Motorbike gear shall protect you from bruises and cold. -> FailF4 (Ava: I don't need lectures, you dick.)

Flatter5:
I feel flattered. You are nice man too.
a)  It’s not just appearance what I like about you.  -> Flatter6

Flatter6:
I’d like to see what under your outfit.
a) -Foreplay- -> FlatterForeplayAfter

FlatterForeplayAfter:
You are big boy down there.
a) That was great. Let's do more. -> FlatterNo
b) That was great. See you soon -> Bye

FlatterNo:
I don't feel like that. Let's change topic. Do you know someone else around?
a) Yes, Kristy, over there. Do you know her too? -> Rebel1

Party1:
I haven't heard of any. When and where exactly it is going to begin?
a) I dunno. We can chat a bit until we see some goers. -> Party2
b) I dunno. Could you obtain that intel for me? -> FailP1 (Ava: I'm not doing that...)
c) I dunno. I'll back when I obtain that info. -> Bye_nosuchparty

Party2:
That will work. And I don't mind a chat.
a) Do you know Kristy over there? -> Rebel1
b) The weather is nice today. -> FailP2 (Ava: You are kidding me with such topic.)

Rebel1:
Yes. She is cool lady, she doesn't give a fu*k about anything.
I'm like her.
a) Indeed. I'm too. Let's do something crazy. -> StateR2
b) I bet you are even cooler. -> StateR4

Rebel2:
I'm doing when I want.
a) I didn’t mean that. I’ll find that later. -> Rebel3

Rebel3:
No one tells me what I have to do. No one.
a) You are the coolest girl around. -> StateR4

Rebel4:
I'm a rebel, there is no rule I let restrict me.
a) Let's see. I dare you for sex right here in public. -> Rebel5

Rebel5:
Ehm.... I'm not gonna chicken out.
-KittyStyle- -> StateKittyAfter

StateKittyAfter:
That was good! But I want you deeper in me.
a) I'll love to. -Doggy- -> GenericAfter
b) Me too. Wanna warm me up a bit first? -BlowJb- -> GenericAfter
c) I need a minute off. See you soon. -> Bye

GenericAfter:
That was great! What are we doing next?
a) -Blowjob- -> GenericAfter
a) -KittyStyle- -> GenericAfter
c) -DoggyStyle- -> GenericAfter
d) I need a minute off. See you soon. -> Bye

Backhere:
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« Last Edit: December 18, 2019, 12:24:50 pm by Tabby »

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Re: Kristy and Ava
« Reply #7 on: December 18, 2019, 12:27:54 pm »
I added some missing parts today and small meow labyrinth. :-)

Please review and post suggested changes or at least language corrections.
I know I'm pushing, but Christmas is getting close.

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« Reply #8 on: December 29, 2019, 06:22:43 am »
Here is the reiteration:

Default state:
(If player is feline/male/GlassRoom) Purr... Hello my brother. What brings you to the Glass Room?
(If player is feline/female) Hello sister. Would you like some company?
(Otherwise/male) Hey dude.
(Otherwise/female) Hey cutie.
a) My eyes can’t get enough of you so I came to get a better look-> Flatter1
b) I heard there was a party tonight.(lie) -> Party1
c) Meow. -> Meow1
d) I want to get some pu*sy. -> FailD (Ava: F.O.)


Meow1:
Meoow.
a) Meow. -> Meow2
b) Meeow! -> Meow3
c) Meuaw! -> Meow4

Meow2:
Meeow!
a) Meow. -> Meow1
b) Meuaw! -> Meow4
c) Meoow. -> Meow3

Meow3:
Meuaw.
a) Meow. -> Meow1
b) Meuaw! -> Meow4
c) Meoow. -> Meow2

Meow4:
Meow.
a) Meow. -> Meow1
b) Meeow! -> Meow3
c) Meoow. -> Meow4
d) Could we speak English instead? ->

MeowOut:
OK
a) I see you’re keeping cool. -> Flatter1
b) I heard there was a party tonight.(lie) -> Party1


(Flatter states: flattering instead of (nonexistent?) party topic - slower progress but you get foreplay first)

Flatter1:
I’m glad I caught your attention.
a) I haven’t seen an outfit like that since the Blue Oyster Bar-> FailD (Ava: F.O.)
b) A beautiful outfit to compliment a beautiful lady.-> Flatter2

Flatter2:
Thanks, I really enjoy dressing up.
a) What inspires your style-> Flatter3

Flatter3:
I like steel and chrome.
a) That isn’t motorbiker gear.  -> Flatter4
b) Me too, though I don't dress up like that. -> FailF3 (Ava: Looks like you've never seen motorbiker outfit. No sane person would ride a motorbike in something like this. I was just messing with you.)

Flatter4:
I know, I’m kidding. I’m also kinda rebellious and I like being dominant.
a) I’m liking the attitude.  -> Flatter5
b) Motorbike gear shall protect you from cold winds and bruises. -> FailF4 (Ava: Sure I guess. Bye now!)

Flatter5:
I’m flattered. You’re not too bad yourself.
a) I’m enjoying more than just your appearance.  -> Flatter6

Flatter6:
I think I’m getting the same vibes. Let’s liven things up a little. I’m gonna give that boner some attention.
a) -Foreplay- -> FlatterForeplayAfter

FlatterForeplayAfter:
You’re pretty big down there!
a) That was great. Could you do it again?-> FlatterNo
b) That was great. See you soon -> Bye

FlatterNo:
I don’t feel like it right now. Let's talk some more. Are you familiar with anyone else around here?
(If player has met kristy) I know Kristy over there. Have you two met? -> Rebel1
(Otherwise) Sigh, I’m not that popular. ->Friend1

Friend1: Oh... Are we friends?
a) I mean... I just met you. -> (Ava: You don’t seem brave enough to make friends yet.)
b) We could be the best of friends. -> Friend2

Friend2: “Best Friends”... I like that. No, I love it!
a) I love it too -> Friend3
b) Don’t get too carried away. ->(Ava: Don’t play with my heart like that. This conversation is over.)

Friend3: And I love you. ->

Party1:
I haven't heard of one. Who’s hosting and at what time?
a) I dunno. We can chat for a bit until we see some partygoers. -> Party2
b) I dunno. Could you ask around for me? -> FailP1 (Ava: I'm not doing that...)
c) I dunno. I'll back when I get more info.-> Bye_nosuchparty

Party2:
I don't mind a nice chat.
a) Cool, do you happen to know Kristy over there? -> Rebel1
b) The weather is nice today. -> FailP2 (Ava: You have got to be kidding me.)

Rebel1:
Yeah.  She’s crazy; she doesn't give a fu*k about anything. I want to be just like her.
a) But I love you, Ava. Don’t try to become something you’re not.-> StateR2
b) I bet you could become even better! ->B1

Rebel2:
I’ll do what I want. I don’t need your advice.
a) I didn’t mean that. I’m sorry. -> Rebel3

Rebel3:
No one tells me what I have to do. No one.
a) I’m crazy in love with you. I admit it. -> StateR4


Rebel4:
I need to see proof. I dare you to f*ck me right here out in the open.
a) I accept, but you can still chose the position.-> Rebel5
b) Here…out…in f-front of everyone? -> RFail

Rebel5:
I was hoping for something… different, maybe even a little experimental. Just follow my lead.
-KittyStyle- -> StateKittyAfter

B1: *Ava blushes* You’re too kind, but you can’t really mean all of that?
a) If I’m being totally honest, I want nothing more than to fill you with my love. ->Flatter6
b) I’m kidding. You should see the look on your face (Ava: You dirty f*ck!!! You can’t treat others like thatQ)

StateKittyAfter:
That was good! I enjoyed that, but I need you deeper inside me.
a) I have just the thing. ->Doggy
b) Me too. Wanna warm me up a bit first? -BlowJb- -> GenericAfter
c) Your lips have sucked me dry. I’m going to rest. -> Bye

Doggy/GlassRoom: Hee hee fine, but I’ll still lead! Let’s fill this room with the sounds of our love!
Doggy- -> GenericAfter

GenericAfter:
That was great, but we still have time. Keep it coming baby!
a) -Blowjob- -> GenericAfter
a) -KittyStyle- -> GenericAfter
c) -DoggyStyle- -> GenericAfter
d) I need a minute to rest. I’ll be back -> Bye

Backhere:

YOU!!! Where have you been!?! I’ve been in need of the best sex in the universe and you’re nowhere to be found!
a) ? —> BH2

BH2: Get over here so I can give you some lovin. You have no idea how long I’ve been waiting!!
A) Blowjob —>genericAfter
b)Kitty —>genericAfter
c)Doggy —> Genericafter

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Re: Kristy and Ava
« Reply #9 on: December 29, 2019, 03:40:40 pm »
Thanks, that was quite a job.

I have some questions and notes.

The sentence "I heard there was a party tonight." Is the past tense intentional? I'm a bit surprised by this form. But I'm learning English mostly by reading Internet where most posters are not native English speakers.

State Friend3 has no responses. Should it somehow connect Rebel4 state?

State B1, supposed shortcut in rebel states leads way back to Flatter states. I changed that connection to Rebel5 state until cleared up.

Need some response text for Backhere state.

Bye the way, what difference is in "friend of mine" (not in this dialog) I see Americans to use instead of "my friend" That question has been following me for years.
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« Reply #10 on: December 29, 2019, 06:05:18 pm »
I am by no mean a linguist in any shape or form, but I’ll do what I can.

Regarding language: In every-day informal conversation you find that the past tense is more commonly used. Keep in mind that I am writing informally.

Regarding Friend3: I forgot to finish because of sleep deprivation 😂 here it is:

Friend3: And I love you.
a) I want to prove my love to you. -> Kitty —> kittyafter

Regarding B1: Create a new state:
BForeplay: Your bulge tells me everything I need to know. How about a blowjob?
a: I would enjoy that very much! —> blowjob
b: I am going to f u c k your t i t s! (Ava: Now that’s just cruel! Take your wise a*s and head out!) —> leave

Regarding Backhere: There is already a back here state and the response is supposed to be confusion (“?”) where the player is surprised so he doesn’t say anything and Ava continues to BH2.

Friend of mine and My friend are just two ways of saying the same thing. Use them interchangeably in order to keep your writing diverse

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« Reply #11 on: December 30, 2019, 01:01:32 am »
Dialog file updated.
Thanks.
Please check & fix the guide dialog.

Speaking of sleep deprivation, I wasn't done with my daily stuff until 4am yesterday because I spent too much time with doing that Rio scene prego mode. Today I've done my real life tasks first to not end up the same.
I'm leaving tomorrow till the end of year.

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« Reply #12 on: December 30, 2019, 01:19:03 am »
So you want me to fix Taight dialogue then?

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« Reply #13 on: December 30, 2019, 10:44:31 am »
Yes.

The remaining tasks for v0.671 are:
Taight dialog,
Guide "dialog",
well, you can also check that 3 sentences of Rachael "dialog" in the Crow's nest (or in the data/dialog/chat_rachael.xml file)

That's all I need to call it v0.671 and release that.