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Jasmin
« on: August 11, 2020, 03:01:41 am »
1. Do you need something? I'm getting ready for my workout.
a. Nah just checking out the place. Leave
b. Actually, could I join you? 2

2. "Sure why not! I'm doing my yoga session next. Come on, I'll show you my routine!"
a That sounds like a good time! 3
b I don't have time for this. Leave

3. The mats are over here.
a *Follow her* Go to 4
b On second thought, I think I'll go do my own thing. Leave

4. "Let's start with some stretches to loosen up."
a Good idea. Go to 5
b I would rather not. Go to fail
c How about I stretch you out instead? Go to 6b

5. Jasmin begins with some leg stretches and pelvic tilts. You mimic her l motions.
a. next. Go to 6a
b. Take off your pants. Go to 6b

6a. After nearly 10 minutes of yoga, you follow Jasmin towards the gym equipment.
a. next. Go to 7a

6b "I don't usually accept such bold customers, but you've gotten lucky and caught me during heat."
a. I want you to ride me. Go to 7b

7a. "Let's do bench presses. You can go first."
a. I need a minute, how about you start. Go to 8b
b. I'm too tired, I'm gonna head back to the house. Leave
c. Let's go! Go to 8a

7b. "Have it your way. Lay back cutie, You're about to enjoy a killer view."
a. *Cowgirl* Go to C Cu m

8a. You lie down on the bench and grasp the bar. "I'll spot for you" says Jasmin.
a. Go to 9a

8b. "Okay I'll go first I guess. Please spot for me."
a. Okay. Go to 10b

9 You begin with 50lb and do a set of ten.
a. Do another set. go to 10a
b. Switch with Jasmine go to 10b

10a. You grab the 60lb and do another set of ten with some difficulty.
a. Do one more set. Go to 11a

10b. Jasmin positions herself on the bench. You watch her t its rise and fall with her heavy breathing.
a. Do a set. Go to 11a
b. Make a move. Go to 11b
c. Look Jasmin Over. Go to 11c

11a. For your last set you grab the 75lb weight and lay back on the bench. Jasmin seems impressed.
a Continue go to 12a

11b. You gives Jasmin's as s a playful smack as she passes. Her eyes get wide for a moment.
a. Go to 12b

11c. You check out Jasmin while she does her rep. You look at her broad strong shoulders, beautiful pair of t its that compliment a somewhat deep chest, and strong, well built legs.
a. Continue. Go to 12c

12a. You complete the first five presses as your triceps burn. On the final press you feel them start to fail.
a. Continue. Go to 13a

12b. A sly grin replaces the initial shock on Jasmin's face. She pulls you into a kiss while simultaneously sliding a hand into your boxers.
a. Continue. Go to 13b

12c. Jasmin notices you staring. "Is there something you need?" She inquiries.
a. Slide her closer. Go to 13c
b. Apologize. Go to fail

13a. You start to panic, but you feel the weight lessen as Jasmin firmly lifts it out of your grasp and places it gently back on the rack.
a. Continue Go to 14a

13b. She leans closer into you. You can feel her soft breast against your chest. You here her whisper "I want you to fu ck me like an animal."
a. *Doggystyle* go to Cu m

13c. You slide Jasmin, still on her back, to the end of the bench. She squeaks in surprise. You force her legs back. "I'm flattered that you want me this badly." She says "So you can put it in my as s as a reward."
a. Missionary. Go to M Cu m

14a. You go limp from exhaustion; your arms hang to the floor. You close your eyes to try and block out the pain in your upper body.
a. Continue. Go to 15a

15a. You suddenly her weight on your hips as she straddles you and caresses your already erect pe nis. You twist her nipples gently.
a. Continue Go to 16a

16a. "You did really good. But you've tired yourself out. How about you sit up straight so I can relax you."
a. You want to go bareback??? Go to 17a

17a. You wiggle out of your gym shorts as Jasmin's panties and bra slide under the bench. Your pen is is soaking in pre-cu m. "Excited, are we?" Jasmin purrs.
a. *Seated* go to Cu m

Fail. If you want to do something together, just ask. Don't be a creep.
Leave

C C um. Oh God, I needed that so badly. We should do this again sometime.
a. I'm really enjoying this position. Don't slow down! *Cowgirl*
b. Flip over so we can do doggy. *Doggystyle*
c. *Seated*
d. Let's do traditional. *Doggystyle*

Cu m. "Damnit now I've got cu m all over the gym equipment. We might as well have some more fun. Are you down?"
a. How about you ride me on the floor? Go to 7b
b. More! *Doggystyle*
c. *Seated*
d. Let's do traditional. *Missionary*

M C um. You've got me sweating stud. Are you calling it quits?
a. How about you ride me on the floor? Go to 7b
b. Flip over so we can do doggy. *Doggystyle*
c. *Seated*
d. Let's do traditional


Return Dialogue:

Hey do you min---I remember you! How could I forget such a handsome specimen such as yourself? What should we do together?
a. I'll get a yoga mat. (Cowgirl)
b. Remember that romantic ride on the bench press? (Seated)
c. I'll do you behind if you want. (Doggystyle)
d. I'm hungry for your butt today. (Missionary)
e. I was actually just visiting today. I'll be sure to check back later! Leave

« Last Edit: August 11, 2020, 03:15:12 am by 1r2k5ng09df8s3 »

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Re: Jasmin
« Reply #1 on: August 11, 2020, 03:15:53 am »
Let me know if there is anything I should change

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« Reply #2 on: August 12, 2020, 10:26:16 pm »
It seems pretty good! I'll turn it into XML file soon.

I have some minor points to consider.
1. Because USA uses different units than the entire rest of the planet, most non-US people have no idea how much is 50lb. If I replace that with metric equivalent, US people will think WTF. Putting both values/units in would look inappropriate for dialog. I suggest to avoid numbers and replace it with for example "medium sized weight", "a bit heavier weight" etc. if possible. Or is there a better way around?
2. Anal missionary scene belongs to HTH Beta. It does not fit this generation of HTH by drawing style, c0ck model and everything. I would leave that out. That scene is in HTH Beta anyway.
3. For C um states, there should be alternative sentence for the case player left the scene early - not cu mmed.
« Last Edit: August 12, 2020, 10:28:12 pm by Tabby »

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« Reply #3 on: August 13, 2020, 01:27:28 pm »
I assumed that since it's an American game the weights wouldn't matter. I'll make a fix ASAP.

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« Reply #4 on: August 13, 2020, 10:09:03 pm »
Yes, US units wouldn't matter in sentence where actual magnitude is not important for meaning of the sentence. But if the audience is supposed to imaginary feel the mass of weight to be lifted then it's a different case.

Most non-US people are familiar with US miles. So when told to walk 5 miles, one have an idea in the head how far it is: 5 km and around half more, so it's under 2 hours of swift walk.
Some other US units are obvious by it's name. So when non-US person is told that someone is 6 feet tall, he looks at his own foot and imagine 6 of these. Medieval units sound weird but you have an idea how much it is.
Then there are units most non-US never heard of, like volumetric ounce, mass ounce and some other I've never heard of. So the only thing that goes through head is WTF.

Honestly, when I read the sentence "You begin with 50lb and do a set of ten." my head images lifting 50kg (hard-core start) even through I know that 1lb is just 0.45kg
« Last Edit: August 13, 2020, 10:11:54 pm by Tabby »

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« Reply #5 on: August 14, 2020, 06:51:47 pm »
Okay will fix