It seems pretty good! I'll turn it into XML file soon.
I have some minor points to consider.
1. Because USA uses different units than the entire rest of the planet, most non-US people have no idea how much is 50lb. If I replace that with metric equivalent, US people will think WTF. Putting both values/units in would look inappropriate for dialog. I suggest to avoid numbers and replace it with for example "medium sized weight", "a bit heavier weight" etc. if possible. Or is there a better way around?
2. Anal missionary scene belongs to HTH Beta. It does not fit this generation of HTH by drawing style, c0ck model and everything. I would leave that out. That scene is in HTH Beta anyway.
3. For C um states, there should be alternative sentence for the case player left the scene early - not cu mmed.