Got some time to check it myself finally. It's good.
I didn't replace censored stars with actual words because I'm only 80% sure which word is spot on. I'm not native English speaker (obviously).
Added some variations to scene returns because most scenes have two possible results, one when player clicks Back button, other one when player clicks Done button after scene finished.
There no variations done for different zones. Well, it's unnecessary for Jade as Sun Temple is not interesting zone. Speaking of that, should I make Jade wear different dress (i.e. red one) in Sun Temple by default?
The little flaw is that some responses don't fit in response line length. I can modify response pane to be a bit wider but some responses won't fit anyway. There is on easy way to make response multiline. Well, there is a way around to place a response text on two responses leading to the same action. But that would look a bit odd because of lines distance.
Some responses may be altered a bit to fit. Do you have HTH patched version for testing the XML dialog files?
The question is, do you want me to extend text and response panes width a bit?
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