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Dialog done.
I need some help with language and style corrections before I turn that into XML file. I'm obviously not entirely English speaking person.

1: Ginger: Hi there, looking for a drink?
    (if player gender is female): Note: this dialog has no branch for female player. Ginger scenes have no strap on dildo mode.
a) Player: Absolutely! Could you get me one? → 2
b) Player: Hi beauty, we can have two on me. → 3
c) Player: No, thanks.

2: Ginger: Let’s see what you can offer.
a) Player: I’m sorry for mistaking you for waitress. → 2a
b) Player: I’m not broke. → fail_w

fail_w: Ginger: And I don’t work here. Get off.

2a: Ginger: Nevermind.
a) Player: May I buy you a drink? ->3

3: Ginger: That would be nice. But, ehm, is that a boner what I see in your pants?
a) Player: I can’t help that, you are such attractive cat. → 4
b) Player: No, I carry my wallet down there safe from thieves. → dishonesty fail
c) Player: I wish it was. It’s just pair of socks to compensate my small junk. → 3j

3j: Ginger: Are you kidding me?
a) Player: Of course I do. You are such attractive cat. → 4
b) Player: Not at all. → freak fail

4: Ginger: I've heard that a small p-nis shouldn't be a problem in a loving relationship.
a) Player: Mine is not small and I really hope that you don't have any. -> 5f ... -> Ginger is female
b) Player: Mine is not small but I don't mind if yours is. -> 5h ... -> Ginger is herm

(female branch of dialog)

5f: Ginger: Just joking. Did you got scared? Your face seems worried.
a) Yeah, I would not like that kind of surprise. → 7f
b) No, I’m fine. → 6f

6f: No point of hiding it, your face told it all.
a) You are right, I would not like that. → 7f
b) No way I could get worried. → dishonesty fail

7f: Being honest is nice of you.
a) You are nice too. → 8

(herm branch of dialog)

5h: Ginger: Well, ehmm, I actually have one.
a) For real? → 6h
b) I hope you are kidding me! → 5f (to female branch of dialog)

6h: Once a long time very unlikely case occurs when very early in the embryo development one part is male while the other female. Even more rare is when both sets of genitals are developed to some extent. The result is that I’m a bit of both.
a) Well, that makes you very special.
b) You fu-king freak! → rude fail

7h: Thanks, by far not everyone sees that this way.
a) I like you with your special body. → 8
b) I like you but I doubt that I can handle that. → bye

(common part of dialog)

8f/h: You said your is not small. I wonder what size is it ;-)
a) Adequate … → 9
b) Not your business  → rude fail

9: Could I check it?
a) -Blowjob- ->10

10: done) Such a tasty load…
   a) I would like to check these nice titties of yours now →11
   b) I have more of that -> Blowjob
   c) See you soon. → Bye
back) You don’t enjoy it?
   a) I’m sparing all that for next action. Could I see your nice titties?
   b) Let’s continue. -> Blowjob
   c) I’m not in the right mood. See you soon. → Bye

11: Why not ...→sprite ****
a) I would like to make them swing → -doggystyle → 12
b) I would like to make them bounce → -missionary → 12

12: done) That was amazing, I sure would like more.
      Back) Why stopping, I’m not done yet.
      None) What are you thinking of?
a) Let’s go doggy.→ -doggystyle
b) Make yourself comfortable on the bed→ -missionary
c) I really love you tongue → Blowjob
d) Bye

(player return if left in state 10 or later)
Backhere: Nice to see you again!
a) I could not forget our good time. → 12 (npc_status is “none”)
b) Nice to see you too. But I’m just passing. → bye

dishonest_fail: Ginger: Go tell that someone else. Bye.
rude_fail: Fu-k you too!